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Post by Lovestar on Jul 8, 2013 19:21:10 GMT -5
to think, this house was so alive yesterday, dinner was cooking...now it's lonely again.
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Post by Bloodclaw on Jul 8, 2013 19:26:29 GMT -5
who here read the chapters of my story? there's 12 chapters so far. id call it dark,but heartwarming at the same time.
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Post by Lovestar on Jul 8, 2013 19:28:51 GMT -5
I read all the byfar chapters
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Post by Lan on Jul 8, 2013 19:29:21 GMT -5
o.o
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Post by Bloodclaw on Jul 8, 2013 19:29:58 GMT -5
is chapter 12 good?
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Post by Lovestar on Jul 8, 2013 19:32:31 GMT -5
yeah
And Breezey, I'm about to claw your tail off if you don't reply to us...JK! XD Did I get ya?
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Post by Bloodclaw on Jul 8, 2013 19:33:54 GMT -5
Breezepelt read the chapters. Lovestar said they're amazing.
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Post by Lan on Jul 8, 2013 19:34:38 GMT -5
Angel, am I clear to call ya again?
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Post by Lovestar on Jul 8, 2013 19:34:53 GMT -5
dangit, he's offline. Can I talk to either one of my best friends?
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Post by Bloodclaw on Jul 8, 2013 19:35:59 GMT -5
which number do u hv? I hv my old phone again.
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Post by Lan on Jul 8, 2013 19:37:36 GMT -5
Dunno =w='
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Post by Bloodclaw on Jul 8, 2013 19:39:49 GMT -5
2567978522 now Lan.
There was a shot in the dark, I was caught by surprise There was a hole in my heart, there were tears in your eyes And there was nothing to say 'cause you made up your mind So I guess what you meant when you left was goodbye So if you're gonna go and leave me in a lonely grave I won't let it show until you've finally flown away You gotta know that you tear me up when you say You wanna take it all away, take it all away You tear me up when you say You wanna take it all away, take it all away You were the one and it was enough To be the one you were dreaming of You were the one and we called it love And now you take it all away, take it all away I felt a pain in my chest with your kiss on my cheek And as I try to digest the words I couldn't believe I'm left with nothing to say with my heart on my sleeve Making it easy to hurt and even harder to breathe So if you're gonna go and leave me in a lonely grave I won't let it show until you've finally flown away You gotta know that you tear me up when you say You wanna take it all away, take it all away You tear me up when you say You wanna take it all away, take it all away You were the one and it was enough To be the one you were dreaming of You were the one and we called it love And now you take it all away, take it all away You take it all away, you take it all away, you take it all away You gotta know that you tear me up when you say You wanna take it all away, take it all away You tear me up when you say You wanna take it all away, take it all away You were the one and it was enough To be the one you were dreaming of You were the one and we called it love And now you take it all away, take it all away.
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Post by Lan on Jul 8, 2013 19:43:44 GMT -5
PIKAAAAAP
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Post by Bloodclaw on Jul 8, 2013 19:44:54 GMT -5
I was in the bathroom. retry. XD
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Post by Breezestar on Jul 30, 2013 18:43:06 GMT -5
Great poem, Angel.
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